This pleases Myrkul.
*The Royal Carriage’s steady pace was swift. Inside it, the Queen’s handmaiden accompanied Her Majesty. *
The young, beautiful, maiden parted the veil on the window “Your Highness, I noticed you don’t look out to marvel at the unearthly beauty of this land. Are you unimpressed by it?”
The golden orbs in the Queen’s eyes met those of the maiden. Without looking through the window, her lips parted “Alex, dearest. Lord Tarvald has made of Stenhus a place most admirable. It is a diamond among the lands of our Blood. Why would I need to look out and admire something that is, without a doubt, just excellent...”
Very well put together and covers all the main areas of a good coe recruitment post.
The biggest pros are that the sections are separated clearly [and don't run together] and that you communicate what the county / collective actually is
Well done brother, well done!
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Oh dear me....
Great post, Tarvald! This is probably the most effectively organized county recruitment post I've seen, and I love your graphics!
Thanks so much Lady Scuttle :)
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