-1. The first link 'Discord' doesn't work. It looks like the 'e' and 'l' in elyria at the end of the link are reversed.

-2. In "The Crafting Experience" section it says:
"Instead, you interact with the rock wall containing the vein of ore with your trusty pick-axe equipped and get to breaking rock to prize that ore out of the rock for your use."

'Prize' is a noun, not a verb. That should be 'pry'.

-3. In the "Real-Time Crafting" section it says:
"If we consult what we’ve learned about our technique via its recipe, we would know these cues mean its ready."

The 'its' as the second-to-last word should be 'it's' or 'it is'.

-4. In the "Real-Time Crafting" section it says:
"We call these “crafting challenges” and they are more likely to happen when the recipe you are attempting is difficult for your character, based on your character’s skill level."

There should be a comma after 'challenges"' as both prior to that and after that are complete thoughts on their own. Comma is appropriate, though, as they are related.

-5. In the "Real-Time Crafting" section it says:
"This way you can decide for yourself which indicator to works best for your circumstances."

Remove the word 'to'.

-6. In the "Real-Time Crafting" section it says:
"And of course, the metal is cooling every moment its out of the forge fire, so you only have a limited time with the hammer before you have to put the metal back into the forge to heat it back up."

'its' should be 'it's' or 'it is'.

-7. In the 'Real-Time Crafting" section it says:
"This back and forth continues until the blade is the approximately correct shape or something happens to ruin the blade."

Move the word 'the' from before the word 'approximately' to before the word 'correct'.

-8. In the 'Real-Time Crafting" section it says:
"A Neran longblade is fullered weapon, which means that, in addition to forging out the rough shape of the blade, we need to work a fuller down the centerline of the blade using our fullering tools."

Insert the word 'a' between 'is' and 'fullered'.

-9. In the 'Real-Time Crafting" section it says:
"As we interact with vessel, we see an overhead view of the barrel with our sword blade and tongs above it.

Insert the word 'the' between 'with' and 'vessel'.